I love the lines and facial expressions. The layout needs to be tweaked so not to distort Cynthia’s arms. What could be cool is to have her arms ‘break out’ of the comic box in the last panel. The first panel, maybe keep her sitting with her arms up and the second panel make it look like she stood up quickly. Really love the style though. Makes the characters feel like they have weight to them.
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I love the lines and facial expressions. The layout needs to be tweaked so not to distort Cynthia’s arms. What could be cool is to have her arms ‘break out’ of the comic box in the last panel. The first panel, maybe keep her sitting with her arms up and the second panel make it look like she stood up quickly. Really love the style though. Makes the characters feel like they have weight to them.
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